This old thing! Forgot about this. does anyone even read it anymore?
Perhaps I should be more attentive to this blog in the future. for now, I'm writing a proper book sized book - well, a smaller book sized book. the size isn't really important, though. the story will go on for as long or as short as it needs to...
perhaps i'll tell you more about it as time goes on. It's only three chapters in at the moment. there's murders, wonderful haircuts, skate parks, robots, coffee, wars, towels, morgues, museums and all sorts of impossibilities within.
as Sherlock Holmes never said (though he did enjoy the philosophy of the quote's exact opposite) "once you have eliminated what is possible, the remainder, however impossible, must be the truth." I'm making each case sillier and more impossible than the last, each of which has a really simple resolution, when you think about it without really thinking about it. Ask a five year old, they'll suss it pretty quickly. everyone else: look to the options you dismiss straight away. it's that one.
oh, and I've done lots more short stories since we last met. you can find them all at http://crumpetsandtea.me/?s=izaak+stoakes . I'll leave the exploring to you...
Bye!
The Geek Speaks
the home of the geeky Izaak Stoakes and his geeky creations
Wednesday 27 February 2013
Friday 22 June 2012
Remember me?
Hullo again!
i've decided that i'm going to write a book. to get you all excited, here's a not that particularly interesting chapter (it will probably become chapter three).
and yes, it has taken me this long to write.
i've decided that i'm going to write a book. to get you all excited, here's a not that particularly interesting chapter (it will probably become chapter three).
and yes, it has taken me this long to write.
CHAPTER
THREE
“Sorry
I'm Late.”
if
Keighley could see through his own fringe – which, most of the
time, he couldn't – he would have known that no one there to
apologise to. The head Barista was outside, under the awnings,
drinking a lukewarm coffee from a take away cup, smoking a damp
cigarette, not giving a damn about the empty café inside.
It was another
slow day at Café Dante. Not as slowly as yesterday, where they
didn't make any money - Keighley had zoned out whilst a customer was
talking and didn't make his order until 8 hours later - but it was
still slow non-the-less.
Despite the
inclement weather and the (apparent) constant need for people to have
coffee on the go, they never really had much business here. There
are always queues in Nero's, Coasta's, and Starbucks', as well as all
those other independant coffee shops dotted about, but Café danté
seems to work in the opposite way.
It wasn't to do
with location – the Café was placed awkwardly between two quite
successful shops - one a bookshop and the other a newsagents – in
close proximity to the town centre on the perfectly named Steep Hill.
It wasn't to do with the look; the place is tidy, spacious, and
stylish, all decked out in a ninteen-thirty's art deco design. It
wasn't to do with the coffee, which doesn't recieve many complaints,
and is ordered from a successful bean provider. It just happens not
to be very popular.
The
world is full of extroverts; people who live, breathe and drink in a
world of parties, confidence, and whirlwinds of high octane, lively,
and charismatic personalities. Keighley was definitely not invited to
the extrovert's parties, and even if he was, he'd make small excuses
and try his best to get out of going to them. Not that he lacked
confidence, or friends – he just didn't need them around all the
time. He was perfectly happy with a few friends, and the odd meet-up,
and was very much into singing, which he was exceptionally good at.
If he did attend a party, or a club or a pub, then no one would be
able to stop him from rushing up to the open mic or the karaoke
stage. was more than eager to present his vocal skills at any party
or social activity. But he didn't need to do so to be happy.
Keighley
didn't exactly look right, no matter what he was doing, or wearing,
or saying – today, for instance, he was dressed in a pale green
cotton shirt (which he'd picked up from Oxfam), a thin, stretched
woolly jumper that looked more at home in the nineteen-fifties (that
probably was from the nineteen fifties; his grandmother had given it
him as a birthday present), and a dark pair of exceptionally skinny
jeans, that made his legs look over-long, giraffe-thin, and hardly
capable of holding up an average twenty-five year old, which ended in
a pair of dark blue desert boots. His Dad used to call him Dali,
after the painter, who was known for his long-legged creatures in his
art.
His
Hair, which was still continuing to get in his way, was a very dark
soil colour, and was violently unmanageable and raggedy. If the top
twenty world championship hair combers, armed with unbreakable combs,
were given free run of Keighley's hair, none of them would be able to
unknot any of the locks or tangles. He wore his hair reasonably long
and footloose, allowing it to do as it pleased. Under the mess of
hair, sat on the bridge of a broken nose, sat a pair of thin framed
glasses, which he wore more as a fashion accessory than a visual aid
(though they are a prescription pair; he doesn't need to wear them as
much as he does). Underneath the glasses, his eyes were very dark
green.
After
a quick change, he was now clad in a black, mucky Café Danté apron
(noticeable by it's logo: a cup and saucer with devil horns) and
standing uselessly behind the counter.
Back in the café,
The early-risen Lincoln Populace continued to meander endlessly past
the shop windows, none of them daring to come in. The door remained
shut, the tables remained empty, and the washing-up remained undone.
Keighley suprised
to hear the door rattle open, and the oldest man in town shuffled up
to the counter. Keighley waited quietly for the man to choose a drink
and announce his order.
Meanwhile, the
Head Barista, Maynard, had finshed his lukewarm drink, but was still
sat at one of the tables outside, running a stubby finger around the
rim of his coffee cup, taking the final drags of his cigarette. His
sad, tired features stared blankly into empty air, and occaisonally a
dull, heavy sigh would jettison into the public airwaves.
Maynard is not the
happiest of chaps. In fact, despite having known, and lived, with him
for nearly six years, Keighley had never seen Maynard happy. He
wondered sometimes if Maynard was clinically depressed; but it seemed
that Maynard was not sad at himself or his life, but at the lives of
others. More specifically, why those lives had to continue to get in
his way.
Under a sad
tangle of short knotty hair hides a sad tangle of features that make
for a very forgettable face. Of all the people Keighley had met
whilst living in Lincoln, Maynard was the most eager to leave. He was
the same age as Keighley, though managed to look at least ten years
older. He was hit at the early age of thirteen with the ability to
grow a formidable stubble, which required shaving frequently. Today,
he had not bothered, and a thick, raggedy black mess covered his jaw
like thousands of dark pins. His dark eyes were surrounded by dark
bags, which he claimed came from having no sustainable sleeping
pattern mixed with insomnia and occasional night terrors. Though,
much more likely, it was because he stayed up too late.
He was, like
keighley, quite into his fashion, even if he didn't look the sort who
cared at all for his appearance. He wore an expensive black shirt and
expensive chord trousers under his mucky apron, and very shiny, very
expensive, brown leather shoes. His hands were pale, bony, and
covered in tobacco stains and slight burn scars.
After another long
period of absolutely nothing interesting at all happening, Maynard
picked himself up from the table, entered the shop, scowling at the
old man standing at the till, and shuddered across to the Coffee
Machine.
“Ugh?” he
sighed, annoyed.
Humans spent
millions of years evolving to master the miracle of spoken
communication, a function unique to the Human species; Maynard was
the exception to the rule. He mainly clicked his tongue, or made
annoyed gestures, or grunted.
This
particular sigh-grunt combo Keighley took to mean “Friend Keighley,
would you care for a Hot Drink?” so he replied with a “please.”
He was proven right when a paper cup full of gloopy hot chocolate
was placed on the counter in front of him. he nursed the beverage,
sipping occasionally while the old man stood silently scrutinising
the menu. Maynard had made himself a cappuchino, which he gulped down
in a couple of mouthfulls before throwing the empty cup over the old
man's head and across the room. It bounced off a table and landed,
rolling, across the wooden floor. Speckles of coffee cartwheeled
through the air. Maynard always, at some point, throw
something across the shop.
“what did you do
that for?” Keighley knew he would be the one cleaning up the mess.
Maynard was just as lazy as he was glum, though, in defence, could
make delicious coffees. “it could have hit this gent!”
Keighley
isn't one for arguments. If he got in more of them, perhaps he would
be more practised at it. His words of protest almost always fell on
deaf ears.
Maynard
gave the strongest hate-glare he could muster, before rebuttling
“whatever. Don't think Mr. Moriarty minds.”
Mr. Moriarty, for
those of you interested, is the Boss, Though neither Keighley or
Maynard had never seen, met, or heard anything from him. He stays
behind a large wooden door at the back of the shop. The only reason
anyone knew he is called Mr. Moriarty is because his name is written
on the door. Inside there there could be anything - Mr. Moriarty
could be dead, or non-existent; Satan, Santa, robot, alien, or just a
bored man.
It could be the
name of the door.
Keighley sighed,
only just before Maynard reached over and punched him in the arm.
“hey...ow!”
Maynard smirked,
turning back to his machine. Keighley, still holding his arm, turned
back to the customer he should have been paying attention to, all
this time.
He was still
waiting for the old man to decide what he wanted to gum on. For the
last ten minutes an old man had been staring purposely at the big
board with the menu on above the counter, where all the glasses and
cups were kept, stowed away.
His ancient eyes
dragged themselves through dusty sockets, as they arched over all the
drinks and back again, checking twice and twice again. His gaunt and
crooked face didn't show any sign of emotion, and his arms swing dead
by his dusty old raincoat. It wasn't wet, despite the rain. For a
panicky second Keighley considered that he may have had, or was in
the process of having, a stroke, and was just about to phone the
emergency services when he sparked:
"Coffee,
please."
"Which
one?" Keighley asked, politely.
"Just
a coffee."
"Cappuccino,
Macciato, Flat White? Americano, Espresso, Frappuccino, Café Latte,
Mussolini, Rossetti..."
Keighley had
memorised the drinks available, and had automatically pointed upwards
at each drink on the board. I needn't tell you that Mussolini and
Rossetti aren't coffees. Keighley occasionally threw In some fake
names to see if anyone ever noticed. No one ever did, despite how
clever they were, or at least made themselves look.
"Coffee."
"OK."
He sighed. "Maynard?"
Maynard,once
again, stared his cold murder glare at him.
"What?"
he barked, angrily. Though it probably shouldn't be described as
angry, as no one had ever heard him use a different tone of voice.
"Flat
White."
Maynard mumbled, and
was dragging one of the mugs under the big machine that does stuff.
Keighley didn't have the foggiest clue what it did, but could operate
it. He knew, at least, that coffee comes from it. He has to clean it
at the end of the day, but he always puts part of it back in the
wrong place, usually a small and tricky little gizmo that has a
really important job. Only a month before, smoke had blared out of
one of the appendages, due to a misplaced filter and a dislodged
piece of gaffer tape.
Maynard didn't give
Keighley time to ask whether it was take away, or whether it was
small, medium, or large. He grabbed the first thing he could reach.
It was large mug, for sitting in. (the shop, not the mug).
"That'll
be £2.75" Keighley smiled.
The
old man's painfully aged features crawled up into a grimace. "That's
disgusting!" the old man shrieked, or at least as much shriek
and as much rage as one can muster after watching looping footage of
inspector Morse and BBC news 24 for the last millennia. "£2.75?
for a coffee? that's criminal, that is!"
Keighley was about
to stumble some apology about price in demand, changing times, and
recession, when Maynard collapsed into the argument with some
ferocity.
"So is your
respirator, or life support, or lung machine, or whatever the hell
you'll be no doubt plugged in in the next month or so. You'll be
lying there, the machine grasping for the last crumbling days of your
lifespan, and I'll look down on you, disgusted, and pull the chord. I
won't bat an eyelid or flicker a muscle. It would be like turning off
a television. I wouldn't have to think twice. The machine would just
slowly come to a stop like the remaining static. £2.75, please."
The man seemed to
forget, or perhaps wasn't listening, but still seemed scared by this
sudden interruption. Looking a mixed of defeated, happy, sad,
thankful, and used-to-it (that's an expression and a half), he forked
over a crinkly fiver.
Keighley paid his
change and handed him his reciept. “I'll bring it over for you.”
Keighley didn't
notice, but Maynard accidentally dropped his Biro lid in the coffee
as he leaned over to place it on the serving tray. He didn't take it
out.
The
flow of customers started to increase a little. It was ten, a much
more reasonable hour for people to be coming in. Speaking of
customers, the old man had perched himself in the corner and, only
having half finished his drink, was dozing quietly, his frail arms
folded over his dry raincoat, resting on his plump frame. That
doesn't say much for the quality of our coffee, which Keighley had
taken to assume was full of high energy, thrilling caffiene, but then
again he looks as though he could probably fall asleep in the middle
of a burning nightclub full of airhorns and hurricanes. he'd wake
him up and ask him to leave, but he really don't think it mattered.
No one is going to complain, and he's happy, asleep, so it's better
for everyone if he stays zonked out for the time bieng.
Time
passed, as it is wont to do, without much happening. The Man slept
for a good two hours before falling off his chair, slamming into a
dead heap on the wooden floor, still slightly damp from the earlier
coffee throw. Keighley, once again stumbling over apologies, and
Maynard, eyes burning with hate, helped the man up and assisted him
to the door. He seemed Ok, not even a bruise. The Customers looked
disgusted and shocked and shamed at the two of them – but then
again, they hadn't stopped him falling or helped him up, had they?
More
customers came and went, all of them too busy or self important to
cause a fuss or strike up a conversation, so for the bulk of the
Morning Maynard tried his best not to have to chat to Keighley. It
is difficult, considering that they live in the same flat, but
Maynard stood his ground and remained silent for the rest of the
shift, only occaisonally grunting if Keighley offered to make coffee,
or Maynard offering to make one for him. Keighley didn't mind – he
was used to it, and he was too focused on all the different tangents
and thaughts bounding about in his head, like a handful of motorised
tennis balls in a room made of trampolines. They weren't important
thaughts or life changing considereations, just little things that
pop into your head when there's nothing to talk about. They were
officially allowed three free hot drinks per shift, but due to Mr.
Moriarty's constant absence, they felt free to make as many free
drinks as they liked.
When
it came to one, which is the busiest hour of the day, Maynard
announced he was going to take his lunch hour. Keighley, not wanting
to struggle by himself with the onslaught of dinner-goers, Work-break
students, thirsty businessmen and mid-day prattlers, also took his
lunch break. They knocked on the door to Mr. Moriarties office and
told the door they'd be back in an hour, and made themselves a couple
of free drinks each.Keighley served the last the remaining customers
with take-away only drinks and decanted the drinks of anyone sitting
in (fortunately no one had baught any food, so they didn't have to
repackage that) while Maynard swung the doors closed and turned the
OPEN sign to CLOSED, adding “Back at 2” on the bottom. When all
the confused customers had been provided with their drinks, they were
quickly ushered out of the café, and the two locked up and left the
thirsty Lincoln populace to fend for itself.
They
both went opposite ways, agreeing to meet back at the café just
before two. Whilst Maynard probably went to skult in some shadows in
a bleak and dreary back alley somewhere, Keighley headed uphill. He
had much more interesting things planned.
Thursday 15 March 2012
I'm On Amazon Now
Hello, Blog Readers!
two of my books are on Amazon now - for the Meagre price of a single pound!
they are available for Kindle only. here are the links:
The First Case-book of the Rainy Day Man: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0078H55MG
Moons and Spiders: http://www.amazon.co.uk/Moons-and-Spiders-ebook/dp/B007K0AEEU/ref=sr_1_2?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1331835002&sr=1-2
Have fun!
two of my books are on Amazon now - for the Meagre price of a single pound!
they are available for Kindle only. here are the links:
The First Case-book of the Rainy Day Man: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0078H55MG
Moons and Spiders: http://www.amazon.co.uk/Moons-and-Spiders-ebook/dp/B007K0AEEU/ref=sr_1_2?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1331835002&sr=1-2
Have fun!
Friday 10 February 2012
Richard Littlejohn
in an attempt to not do any work, i've decided to write a story about Richard littlejohn (a columist for the daily mail whos not unlike commander whatshisname from V for Vendetta who shouts at the telly). i read his column for the first time today, and this is what i assme he looks like, aswell as has for breakfast. in short, a childish poke at some big ol' twat.
Richard Littlejohn wakes up every day at 6.30. it's time for his breakfast.
Richard Littlejohn is not, despite his attitude, not 100% british - his father was, in actual fact, a Romanian Music-box built into the side of a Merry-go-round - which makes him only 1/3 brit, 1/3 romanian and 1/3 amusement park.
Richard Littlejohn doesn't eat breakfast like you or me. he has to wind himself up like an alarm clock. though he doesn't use a normal winding screw - he goes out into the early morning air and finds three stray cats. when he gets home, he crushes the unfortunate moggies between his hands into a messy powder, a mix of cat-dust and blood, and rubs it into his palms fiendishly.
then the winding begins. this usually takes 2 hours. at six thirty, he looks like you or me (well, not me. or you, for that matter) but he looks at least human-ish.
during those two hours he undergo's a change from his usual appearance. his top teeth start to grind up and down in their gums, lke pistons on a giant machine, before changing into colourful metal xylophone blocks. his bottom teeth, which have by now grown into small hammers with round rubber ends, start to chime melodically against the top set. his fingers, which are no longer chubby bone but small brass horns of varying lengh, toot out in time with the zylophone.
in his sockets, his eyes swivel two and fro, swinging side to side like billiard balls. they mist over, and turn into clear glass orbs, each containing a beautifully crafted match-stick roundabout horse, rearing up in terror, a look of shock and fear swept across its gracefull features.
across his usually sweaty forhead the words HELP US scar into the skin, backwards, in that traditional font that he uses to haunt the nightmares of children aged five and up.
his torso rounds, the skin stretching across his bones, and his organs shift to the side, so that he is completely hollow. six of his ribs (three on each side) break out of the skin, and, like his bottom teeth, turn into drumsticks, which beat out a constant thrum, thrum, similar to the thrum of a headache after a joyfull night on the town.
with his transformation into a music box nearly complete, the melodies mould together to create a haunting cover or the Magic roundabout theme played backwards. with this, his legs start to spin violently, until he becomes a large, music blaring draidle, spinning wildly about the room, arms flailing uselessly like streamers off a child's bycicle handles. a shriek of violin bows start to burst form his mouth, dodging the hammers, and rip out a jaunty tune across his dry, blistered lips.
with this, he spins into the street, uncontrollably tearing through walls, bins and any other obstacle, before vanishing into shadows and crawling away, like a descovered spider hidden behind a door.
and that concluded Richard Littlejohn's breakfast.
i suppose i should get back to the essay now...
Tuesday 31 January 2012
March 11th
There really wasn't that much I could
do when the brown parcel arrived at my doorstep that morning. I
remember sitting in my favourite chair, a light green affair, facing
the glass door and window that overlooked my balcony on the first
floor. The manilla parcel was propped on my lap, similar to how a
father would sit a child, before telling them a tall tale before bed.
Since hearing the news it has been
most awfully rainy, but today, the morning sun shone pale and alone
in the sky, its morning rays rolling over the hills and valleys like
pastry. The sunlight did nothing more than make the surroundings
shine a muddy, decayed brown.
I usually lean against my balcony and
watch the life of the countryside sway by. I can see a good two miles
from here, all the hills and fields that surround this place like
pigeons over bread. the vast armys of trees stand proud in their
ranks, and the greenish, greenish grass of the country farms. Up
until today, I was used to seeing them coated in a fine rain; the
faintest of drizzles that threw itself down with such grim force and
determination that one could have mistook it for splinters of a
falling sky.
The two things I remember most, as I
heard those immortal words for the very first time, was the constant
patter of rain against the glass and the cold brass against my ear.
She had relayed the news on the telephone, chocking back tears louder
and more ferocious than any storm cloud could ever muster. I do not
remember if I cried myself; my most vivid recollection after that was
that I had planned where I would put a commemorative plaque. It would
be just outside her door. It would be light blue, white lettering.
We kept a close correspondence by
telephone or letter, though we only saw each other face to face on
the occasional weekend. I'm rather glad she didn't tell me the news
face to face. I would have hated to remember her in that way.
I slumped heavily in my chair, and
called the maid to bring me a tea. I picked up the parcel and read
the label for a second time:
The final letter of Harriet Buxton
the maid had told me that grief works
indifferent ways for different people, and that in a day or two this
might all swell over me, bringing no end to tears, grief, and hurt.
All I did was reread the label for a third, fourth and fifth time.
I stared out of the window, wishing
it would start raining again in torrents, just as it had been doing.
I was surprised when it did so, the first few droplets shattering
against the balcony oor, window, then finally an entire tundra of
rain showered over the never ending green hills.
Today was March 11th, a
day that will echo throughout my memory as one of the darkest days I
have ever faced. She was thirty-two.
Wednesday 11 January 2012
i always think in the wrong direction
everyone else worries about different things from me.
for example, if you are home alone, or walking down a dark street, what do you worry about? most people i've asked worry about attackers, or burgulars, or real life situations.
in this situation i worry about ghosts and monsters. i don't give a moments thaught to chavs or murderers or things like that. because they are easily stopped. you can't stop ghosts. i don't like the thaught of not knowing whats going on. i like to be in the loop with things. i can't stand mirrors, worried that i'll see something in them. faces in places and odd shapes in the dark are the real threats. you can hit a burgular with a pan, but something unknown, and unstoppable, will always win. i don't properly believe in these sorts of things, but still, if something looks a bit like a face, or something jolts, then my mind makes things up to fit it. probably due to a childhood watching doctor who, strange but true, x files, and all other sorts of ghost stories.
for example, if you are home alone, or walking down a dark street, what do you worry about? most people i've asked worry about attackers, or burgulars, or real life situations.
in this situation i worry about ghosts and monsters. i don't give a moments thaught to chavs or murderers or things like that. because they are easily stopped. you can't stop ghosts. i don't like the thaught of not knowing whats going on. i like to be in the loop with things. i can't stand mirrors, worried that i'll see something in them. faces in places and odd shapes in the dark are the real threats. you can hit a burgular with a pan, but something unknown, and unstoppable, will always win. i don't properly believe in these sorts of things, but still, if something looks a bit like a face, or something jolts, then my mind makes things up to fit it. probably due to a childhood watching doctor who, strange but true, x files, and all other sorts of ghost stories.
Saturday 31 December 2011
went and gone and done another one
this one is called "Razorwire faces". it's the third of my stories about spiders.
in floating mazes of
glistening white,
razorwire faces smile
left to right.
pinprick eyes and
barb wire jaws,
shattered legs
and needle claws.
they scratch along
the hairs so thin,
they pierce through
the human skin.
Within the walls of
human flesh
they slice the veins
the blood runs fresh
razorwire faces
have their fun,
eight long legs
and space to run.
Through the heart
and through the tongue,
through the mind
and fingers long
spider scuttles
rictus grin
shattered teeth
with glass within
razorwire faces
know your here
reading this
you have no fear
but beyond
the windows high
darkest spots
the faces lie
Look! Behind!
What's that you see?
Something white?
Something free?
Needle legs
across your back
pinprick itch
and shivers slack
never fear
the spider's song
they're not about
for very long
but as you sit
and as you sprawl,
through your veins
the spiders crawl
razorwire faces
stare from you.
Look at your grin -
it's needles too.
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